Chapter 25. The Address

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“Tell me again why we’re walking this morning?” Sean asked in an amused tone.

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“It’s good for us.” I said.  I didn’t add that it would also accomplish another goal of mine—to check out Rosario Vasquez’s address.  It had been three days since he’d told me where to go, and I’d decided to take Sean along with me—without him knowing exactly why he was tagging along.

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“I can think of a lot better way to get some exercise.  In the morning.  Before work.  We wouldn’t even have to leave the house—and even better, there are no sweaty clothes to worry about.” Sean said with a devilish grin.  When I stared at him with narrowed eyes, he added, “Just sayin’.”

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We walked for less than a block before he spoke again.

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“Seriously—why are we doing this?  Does this have something to do with Vasquez?” he asked.

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“I don’t know what you’re talking about.” I said.  Even to my ears it wasn’t very convincing.

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“Well, whatever it’s about– I’m glad you asked me to come along.”  Sean said.

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“Even though it’s only walking?” I asked.

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“Even though it’s only walking.” Sean said, smiling.

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I changed the subject by noting how well his bruises and scratches had healed, and ended up punching him lightly in the shoulder when he joked that it was because he was part werewolf.

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I stopped when I spotted it across the street.  I’d mapped it out earlier, on my computer at home so I knew exactly where it was.

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“Hey, mind if we stop a minute?  Something weird is going on with my shoe.” I said, and wiggled my foot around a bit.

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“No problem.” Sean said.  He turned and became distracted by a sign.  “Hey…graffiti.  Kids today have such filthy mouths…”

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I watched the house, and wiggled my foot a little more and rolled it from side to side a few times to keep Sean from noticing.

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And then I saw what I was watching for.

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She waddled out of the small house and picked up her newspaper before turning and going back inside.

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Rosario Vasquez wasn’t going to come after me—I knew that for certain now.  He had a reason for staying out of prison and he wouldn’t jeopardize his chances to get out of serving time.  I had a feeling that I’d be hearing from him again, so I decided that I would very carefully find out everything I could about this woman.

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“Shoe situation resolved.” I announced cheerfully.  We finished our walk about fifteen minutes later, then parted ways to finish out the rest of our day.

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SAME DAY, 5:45 P.M.

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“Uh…thanks for coming along with me.  Again.”  I said sheepishly.  “I know you’ve probably got a lot to do, and I keep bothering you.”

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“You know I don’t mind.” Sean said softly.  “Which one is it?” he asked.  I pointed to the storage unit just ahead.  I’d picked up the key from my mom fifteen minutes ago.  We approached the correct unit and I unlocked it and pulled the door up.  The musty smell of stagnant air started curling out into the fresh air outside.  I switched the lights on.

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“Huh.  I was expecting there to be more stuff.” Sean said, looking around.

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“Nah.  He had this tiny one bedroom place.  It was so small he could barely fit his double bed in his room.” I said, and to my surprise I felt like smiling at the memory.  “He was so excited about his own place—he’d hated living in the dorms.”

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“Well…privacy is very important to a guy that age.” Sean said, winking at me.

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“I’ll bet.” I said dryly.

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“So the police went through this when he went missing, right?” Sean asked.

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“Yep.  Then we went through it several times after that.” I said.  “I don’t really expect us to find anything, but a new pair of eyes can’t hurt.”

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I moved to the clothing and started going through the pockets of all the coats, shirts, and pants.  Sean rummaged through some of the equipment scattered around the tables.  We hadn’t bothered with boxes for a lot of the things, because Scott really didn’t have all that much stuff.  The papers he’d had in his apartment were sorted into files at my parents’ house.

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“Music box?” Sean asked, picking up something he’d found on a coffee table pushed up against a sofa.

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“Yep.” I replied.  “He’s had it since…well, before he was born.  Mom got it when she found out she was pregnant with him.”

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“What tune does it play?” Sean asked.

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“I can’t remember the name of it—maybe you’ll recognize it if you wind it up.” I suggested.

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I heard the tinkling chimes of the music box start up.

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“It’s familiar, but I don’t know the name of it.” Sean said.  Suddenly, I heard the loud clack of a piece of wood hitting the coffee table and then something small and metallic skittering across the concrete floor.  Sean cursed and started turning the music box over.

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“That’s weird—the bottom fell out of the box, but—it’s like it was a false bottom.” Sean said.

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“A false bottom?” I asked, and walked closer to where Sean crouched down to look for the part of the box that had fallen to the floor.

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“Hmm…” Sean murmured, and he got on his knees to reach further under the coffee table.  “Oh, wow.  Eddie, you might find this interesting.”

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“What? What is it?” I asked.  I leaned closer, watching as Sean brought something up from the floor.  It was clutched between his index finger and thumb.  Part of me was unwilling to believe that he could possibly have found anything significant.  We’d gone through Scott’s belongings so many times—and not just his family, but trained investigators and police as well.

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“Is there any reason why Scott would have one of these in his possession?  Other than the usual one, I mean.” Sean asked, and the gleam in his eye told me that he thought he’d found something important.

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I peered at what he grasped between fingers and it sparkled as it caught the lights from overhead.  When I realized what it was, I gasped.

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It was a diamond engagement ring.

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End of Story 2 of the Edith Prescott Mystery Series.  Please check back in a few weeks for the beginning of Story 3.  I will likely take a week or two to do some detailed plotting.  I will, however, be moving to another state at the beginning of August, and that means I’m going to be packing and rather busy!  Updates to Story 3, once it begins, will be a bit sporadic at first because of that.  Thanks to all my readers, and to everyone who comments–you are all wonderfully patient and kind.

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  2. Hey! Thanks for a great Story 2! =)
    I enjoyed it very much! (Loved the cliff hanger… Actually, I saw the picture before I could read the lines before and after it, and I totally thought Sean was proposing, haha… got just a little too excited about that, however early/inappropriate it might have been)

    Good luck with plotting Story 3. Hope you have a swift and successful move in August!

    • Lida: Thank you for reading and commenting! I can’t tell you how encouraging it is to hear from readers, and I’m so glad you liked it.

      I thought people would think he was proposing, lol…..but only for a minute. 😉

  3. Yay first comment! 🙂 I are special!

    Oh wow – this is so awesome. With the walk and the sweetness and the werewolf joke.

    So did you have Sean propose to her to get that pic? 😉

    • Medleymisty: lol–you are special anyway. 🙂

      Sean would definitely make a werewolf joke–he’s silly like that, sometimes.

      I did have to get him to propose to her–it’s not the first time he’s done it (though it is for that save file–I never save once their interactions take them into Romantic Interest territory, though I should just save multiple versions…I’m not so great with the whole planning of save files, etc.). I’ve had him propose to her before because I couldn’t remember if there was a kiss involved that looked different from the others–there isn’t. 🙂

  4. Oh shat! I love how Sean’s piling on the suggestions. 😉 And the good thing about when one story is over, the other begins pretty darn soon. I’ll just be sad on the weekends a little more. Course I’ve my own story to begin. 😀 That should tide me over while I wait.

    And yeee, more stuff adding up to the mysterious Scott!

    Any hints about the next story? 😉

    • Amelia: Sean is quite the scamp with the suggestive comments. He won’t let Ed forget that he’s interested in her. 🙂

      I’ll definitely try to get the other story started soon. I have a general idea of where it’s going, but I need to develop a few more specifics. Plus, I want to play with Ambitions a bit more and see what I can do with the things it adds.

      You should definitely begin your own story, and let me know when you do. 🙂

      In the next story, Ed will be looking for more clues about Scott, and will likely travel to his college town to find some answers. There will be a few other things going on, but I haven’t worked out exactly what will go in this next story and what will have to wait for the one after that. 🙂

  5. Twice she asked him to come with her to do some very important and sensitive things. Especially taking him along to look at her brother’s stuff.

    And he’s just become a hell of a rascal, hasn’t he? LOL! I am loving his teasing of her so much. “Other things” they could be doing indeed!

    That last picture, lol! You’re the queen of those interesting shots.

    • LunarFox: Yes–very telling, don’t you think, that she’d take him along for both of those things? Even if her mind is worried that he’s untrustworthy, something else is making her trust him an awful lot.

      He is outrageous with the teasing–difficult to resist, I would imagine. 🙂

      lol! I’m so glad that you think my shots are interesting, given that I envy your photographer’s eye…. I went over various scenarios that would let a ring be shown, and realized that the proposal interaction and the marriage interactions are the only time that rings are shown, unless you just have a Sim wearing one–I didn’t think Ed would automatically slip on a ring she found in her brother’s stuff, so I opted for having Sean “propose” to Ed. I was quite pleased with the way it turned out!

  6. Oh! What Ed must have felt when she saw Sean kneeling among her brother’s things and holding up a ring! It must have taken a full minute for the 82 different thoughts and emotions to run through her!

    Love the werewolf joke, and Ed’s shoe bit. Yay for a fair amount of certainty that Vasquez won’t be coming after her!

    I find it interesting that Sean keeps making all these suggestive comments, but he doesn’t really comment on the fact that Ed invited him into a very personal part of her life in the storage unit (great set, by the way!). Surely he noticed and appreciated this…

    Congrats on a wonderful story! Hope your move goes smoothly!

    • DB: I can only imagine what Ed must have felt–here’s Sean in the midst of her brother’s things which is surreal enough, and then suddenly he’s found something that no one else could find–and it’s an engagement ring.

      Sean loves to tease Ed in a flirty way. From his point of view, things are looking up for him–Ed is inviting him over before work to go for a walk…then after work to go with her to the storage unit containing her brother’s belongings. He makes suggestive comments because he knows she can laugh them off–but he knows she isn’t ready for him to point out that she’s starting to depend on him a lot. You can probably say that he’s….storing it up. Like he’s building a case, and he can use these examples if she ever finds the guts to voice her worries the next time he presses her. He definitely noticed and appreciated what she was doing, but since this is from Ed’s view we’re only in her head.

      That being said–while Ed’s brother’s belongings are certainly personal in a way that many things aren’t, they’ve already been sort of…violated. They’ve been searched through by strangers before–police officers, and other investigators. She’s used to thinking of his things as more like potential clues, so some of the emotional impact is probably deadened for her, by now.

      Thank you so much! We’re trying to pack up a lot of stuff well in advance, so I think it will go well. 🙂

  7. I like banter between Ed and Sean. ^_^

    My favorite screenshot with the music box and the magical mysterious gnome. At first I thought the gnome was waving it around, but then realized he was just standing around, being all cute and creepy, as Mr. Gnomes tend to be.

    • Tess: Thank you! Sean and Ed’s relationship lends itself well to banter… 🙂

      I love the new music box! It is so funny to watch Sims listen to it–they sway in time with the music, which is very cute (I made Sean do it and it was hilarious).

  8. I’ve really enjoyed reading these stories! I’m in awe of how much planning you must do to get the right shots.

    Do you do a lot of switching between all of their households or do they really all just live together in one big house : )

    • Caelum: Thank you very much–I’m so glad you like my stories, and I’m happy to hear from you. 🙂

      What I usually do is have them all in one big house–I change out characters as I need them, but I always have Ed, Sean, and Nick in the household. So I’ll create the characters and when I’m not playing with them, I’ll either move them to the clipboard and save them to the library, or I’ll move them out into the town and let the run around. 🙂

  9. I doubt this counts as an engagement, but what a find! Can’t wait to see what new troubles Ed and Sean will run into next time around. Great job, as always.

    • Tipix7: Thank you! It is definitely a development that Ed wasn’t expecting. I can’t wait to see what new troubles those two will get into either… 🙂

  10. I always love Ed and Sean’s banter but I particularly like how Sean is just making no bones about his feelings for Ed, ever since France. Must be making it mighty hard for Ed to keep it “professional”!

    I’ll miss this story during its hiatus but I’m already looking forward to Story 3! The plot thickens! Rosario’s knocked up some chick! More about Scott! An engagement ring!

    Good luck with your move!

    • Carla: Sean isn’t pulling any punches right now–and I know I wouldn’t be able to keep it professional under such an onslaught…. 🙂

      We’ll find out more about Rosario’s lady, and the current plan is to have Ed travel to Scott’s college town to continue the investigation into his disappearance. I’m looking forward to seeing what Ambitions can do for the story. 🙂

      Thank you!

  11. Sean and Ed seem inseparable! I love the way they spend time together. I’m glad she thought of taking Sean with her to check out the house. Lol at the werewolf joke. The “there is something in my shoe” line was very clever.

    Yay, I’m glad I was right to trust Vasquez. I never expected a pregnant lady though. Your plot has deepened again. This is breathtaking stuff…

    And then we get even more!
    It makes totally sense to take Sean to the storage unit. He is a very smart investigator. What a nice set by the way.
    I had never seen the music box before. It looks very cool. Do Sims get a moodlet from it?

    And woah… I take my hat off! The way you used that pose is fabulous.

    I so hope there is a way to find out who Scott was engaged to!

    This is a wonderful chapter and it shows no end of craftmanship! 🙂

    • Moondaisy: This is so different from your comment at the end of my previous story–you had so many questions. I’m glad to see I tied things up a bit better this time. 🙂

      They do seem rather inseparable–Ed is coming to depend on him, and that will probably freak her out a bit when she notices.

      DB was very close when she was speculating about what could be at that address–I was a little worried I’d given too much away, but then again, true mystery stories are supposed to drop clues that would allow readers to put the pieces together…of course, you’re supposed to have enough red herrings to cause the readers to look another way, as well….

      Thank you! I’m glad you liked the set and that you agree it would be in character for Ed to take Sean to the storage unit.

      The music box came with Ambitions, and it’s pretty funny (there’s a gnome in it). I can’t remember if they get a moodlet from it, but they do dance in a very cute way while listening to it. 🙂

      The marriage proposal pose is extremely useful! I’ll probably use portions of it again! 🙂

      Thank you so much for your kind comments!

  12. The first thing i said when I finished this chapter was “Oh My God! An ENGAGEMENT RING??????” Srsly. WOW! Does Scott have a girlfriend?????
    “We wouldn’t even have to leave the house—and even better, there are no sweaty clothes to worry about.” Sean said with a devilish grin. When I stared at him with narrowed eyes, he added, “Just sayin’.” LOVE IT!!! 😀 😀 😀 😀
    Story 2 was awesome! 😀 Plz be quick with 3! I’ll miss you! and Eddie! and Sean! and everybody else! 😦
    How did you get the last picture? It looks like Sean is proposing to Ed…

    • Mau: We’ll have to wait until Story 3 to find out the story behind the engagement ring. Gotta keep my lip zipped for now!

      I’m glad you love Sean’s teasing–I think he’s a very charming rogue. 🙂

      I’ll try to be back with Story 3 before long….but I will need to plan out some details and with the move coming up, updates might be fewer and far between for a while…

      It looks like he’s proposing to Ed because he is. 😉 I had him propose to get the shot.

      • I don’t like zips any more! 😀

        Does that mean that Sean and Ed are boyfriend and girlfriend??????????????????????????? 😀 THAT WOULD BE SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! 😀

        Also, did Ed say yes????????????????? if she did :D, if she didn’t :(.

      • Mau: lol…zipped lips are necessary to build the excitement for the next story. 🙂

        Unfortunately, that does not mean they are boyfriend and girlfriend–the game file containing these characters is used for posing purposes only. I rarely actually “play” the game with them, unless I need them to have a particular skill or something, because I don’t use any mods that help with that sort of thing (though I probably will, soon). So the marriage proposal happened because I needed a pose for the story, and I didn’t save my progress.

  13. Oh.My.Gosh. I thought Sean proposed! The question I’m asking myself is how will I cope without Ed? And that cliffhanger! My head is buzzing with ideas. So much I have a headache. Ouch.

    • Rhys: lol! I wondered how many people would think that was the case when I posted the picture. 🙂 It shouldn’t be too long before I bring Ed back for Story 3, if nothing crazy happens. I hope your headache isn’t too bad, and that you have fun speculating. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

  14. A wonderful end to a wonderful story! Sean makes me laugh…he’s going to get himself into trouble if he not careful! 🙂

    The first picture is awesome how they are walking in sync. It says so much about their relationship (or maybe it’s just the computer program doing it’s thing…I like to believe otherwise:-) ). Two questions. 1. Where do you find the music box in Ambitions? My sim wanted one, but I couldn’t find it. 😦 2. What interaction did you use to get the next to last picture where Sean is crouching and Ed has her hand on his back? It doesn’t look like it’s part of the “proposal” interaction.

    I love your stories! They are incredible! I’m going to miss reading the updates over the weekend! On another note, have a safe moving day! 😀

    • Jules: Thank you so much. 🙂

      I know you can find the music box in the kids stuff–like in toys or something, I think…..it might be in some of the other areas as well, like in decor?

      That actually is part of the proposal interaction! Isn’t it neat? I had no idea that was in there….but now that I do, I’m sure I’ll use it in other situations. 🙂

      Hopefully it won’t be too long before I can get the first chapter of Story 3 up…but like I said, the moving just means that updates might be a little more sporadic than usual….

      • I finally found the music box! I had looked in toys earlier, but it looked like another toy chest! (Guess I should have looked closer!) 🙂 I also recently had someone propose just so I could see that part of the interaction! It’s so quick you almost need a slow motion button to catch the shot. I wouldn’t have even known it was there! 🙂

      • Jules: It fooled me the first time I saw it too, so I’m not surprised you couldn’t find it before. 🙂

        I always have my finger hovering over the pause button for that very reason, lol.

  15. Great stuff! Interesting find that one. So did Scott have a girlfriend – the ring would be engraved if they already were engaged… or does it belong to someone else?

    • Finwitch: Thank you very much! I don’t know that I’ve seen you comment before, so if not I am very glad to hear from you! That is a question that will have to wait until later to be answered, hopefully in Story 3. 🙂

  16. Ohh, you are so mean… lol, wondeful story and a wonderful way to end my lunch break.

    I cannot believe it’s the end of Story 2, but I will be on the lookout for Story 3. I am stuck on this story like white on rice.

    Again as I always say you are an amazing writer. And I’ve been reading moondaisy’s stories also. The both of ya are great.

    I hope you have a wonderful move and enjoy your new state.

    • Jalode: lol! I’m glad you like the story, despite the fact that I am mean. 😉

      Moondaisy is so wonderful, and one of the nicest people I think I’ve ever encountered online….her stories are a joy to read.

  17. Wow! Loved the story from start to finish. Every part was, simply put: AWESOME!!! Words cannot express how much a talented writer you are, I certainly could never come up with plots and twists and “everyman” characters that people can relate to. If I ever write a sims story, I’d be happy if mine is half as good as yours!

    The last chapter was great and I like that Ed is is trusting Sean more. That trip to France did wonders to their relationship!

    I too found the last picture misleading but didn’t think he would be proposing, it didn’t stop me getting my hopes up!

    Once again great story and I hope the move goes smoothly!

    • Echo: Aww, thank you very much! I am blushing, lol. 🙂 You are really too kind, but I’m so glad you like my story.

  18. Wonderful stuff, as always! Some great shots here from some interesting angles, too. I love the use of a ‘proposal’ shot to mean something else, though I also love the idea of you making Sean propose to Ed a bunch of times.

    • Rad: Thank you! I was really really happy with how this one turned out, photo-wise.

      Making Sean propose to Ed is generally fun, though very weird… 🙂

  19. Hooray for development of the story! Boo for having to wait for the next one! :p

    I hope everything goes smoothly for your moving and that you bring Ed back into our lives once again =) I enjoy reading about Ed so much it’s insanely awesome!

    • Delaneylegacy: Thank you! I’m very happy that you are enjoying my story. Hopefully I’ll be able to get going on the first chapter of story 3 before long. 🙂

  20. Oh and Rachel, out of curiousity, what graphics card do you use? Just wondering because I’m thinking of getting a new one and thought I’d ask you what type you have since your pictures are always so clear!

    Thanks!

    • Echo: I’ll have to get back to you on the graphics card I have….I know it’s an ATI…it’s one where you can connect two cards (I don’t use that feature, though, because it seemed linked to crashes with my game). In the past, I had an amazing NVIDIA card–those are usually good.

  21. I feel really stupid now for posting that comment now. It turned out I had a very good graphics card and the reason the graphics weren’t clear in-game was because I had the graphics on a low resolution setting.

    I feel so stupid and very embarrassed for posting that comment! So I’m not getting a new graphics card. On the plus side I have saved myself the money I would’ve spent on buying a new card.

    Oh well, it shows you how much I am NOT tech-savvy!

    • Echo: lol! Don’t feel stupid–feel very lucky, because now you don’t have to shell out the money for the card! 🙂

    • 4boots: I’m happy you made it through the whole story! Thank you so much for reading through it. 🙂 I should have the first chapter up soon….provided my move doesn’t kill me, lol.

  22. Eddy has picked up some great tips during her time as a detective. That was a smooth piece of surveillance work!

    Can I say how much that pose and the way he’s holding the ring really suits him? Just saying.

    Now I am definitely curious about Eddy’s brother and the ring that no one else was able to find except Sean. He must have the magic touch!

    What a fantastic second story!

    • Carnaxa: Ed is a natural at the detective stuff, for the most part. 🙂

      That pose really does look good on Sean, doesn’t it? 🙂

      Sean does have the magic touch, to some degree–but there may be other reasons why the ring wasn’t found before. I can’t say anything more about that just yet…

      Thank you so much! I’m really excited about getting the third started, but it will be a few weeks yet. My life is in a bit of chaos right now and I have to wait.

  23. I don’t know what to say, that was just an awesome way to end this second story and, unfortunately, I’m now all caught up and will have to wait for the next instalment like everyone else. There was so much in that last chapter – Sean’s playful teasing, Ed’s invitations to Sean to share a painful part of her life, the finding of the ring in the secret compartment.

    I vaguely remember an earlier conversation between Ed and her mother about a girlfriend and them disagreeing on her name – is she the one the ring was for? I know, I know, I will have to wait, but you have in me someone who will be there when the next chapter is published!

    • Illandrya: Thank you so much! I’m excited and grateful to gain a new reader and your comments have really been wonderful to read! I look forward to reading and responding to your next round when the new chapter comes up. It will take a bit of time before I can get to it again, but I’m really happy that you like my series and that you are looking forward to the next story.

  24. Thank you for a great story 2! I really hope Ed will find her brother soon! Now, I am going to have to wait for the next chapter since I’m all caught up!!
    Oh, and before I forget, I wanted to let you know that I started a new story! XD If you’d like, you can take a look, I started it yesterday. 😀

    • Mikayla: I’m glad you liked my story, and I’m looking forward to getting story 3 started. 🙂

      I will try to take a look at your story sometime….things are a bit hectic, but I hope to get caught up on all my reading soon, too. 🙂

  25. OH MY GOD!
    When I saw the last picture… I GASPED!
    I am so happy. And I seriosly didn’t expect that 😉
    Such a great plot, and YAY for story 3.
    – Mia x.

    • Mmia: lol! Yeah…I found a different way to use that pose! At first, I thought I might just show a ring on Ed’s finger or something, but then I realized that there was a very specific pose that focused on a ring. It worked out perfectly for my purposes.

      Thank you! I hope to be updating Story 3 pretty soon, and that the updates will be more regular in a week or two!

  26. Oh, I’m so glad she took Sean with her! Smart girl! (And I’m glad to see Rosario is going to be a father – that is definitely one thing that will turn a man around.) She and Sean definitely have an atmosphere of trust and intimacy brewing – taking him to see her brother’s stuff as well, that’s a big deal!

    Oh wow, finally something to go on for Scott’s case? I wonder what they’ll make of it!

    I also wonder what Ed thinks of Sean kneeling in front of her with an engagement ring? 😉

    Awww, their relationship has come so far in this second story! (Yes, I already know what happens in the third story, lol!) But that trip to France really did it for them, and it was a joy to watch it happen! Terrific 2nd story! 🙂

    • Laura: Yep, there was way too much of a risk that it was a trap. Rosario did stab her in his efforts to kill someone else for money, so…not the most trustworthy guy. Rosario’s impending fatherhood definitely changed his priorities, which seems like a good news for Ed’s safety. It certainly was a big deal for her to take Sean to the storage unit–we’ll see how big in Story 3, pretty much right away.

      Finally they have something new in Scott’s case, and it opens up different sorts of questions than any that were asked before.

      Sean’s kneeling in front of her is pretty hilarious–I felt so clever when I thought of using the propose pose for this purpose. 🙂 Ah TS3 and the lack of animations–sometimes it can be pretty fun.

      It’s a little crazy how much they’ve been through by the end of the second story. Their relationship got off to a running start simply because he saved her life in the first story–that created a particular bond between them that may have fizzled out if they’d parted ways and never seen each other again, but instead they started working with each other. Things just progress from there. 🙂 Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked the story!

  27. Okay, “Story 2” now finished, and I have to say I’m now officially hooked :D.

    I loved this case, it was so exciting having Ed and Sean looking for a stolen vase in France, no less! All the while reading this I kept thinking “Remington Steele” -I hope you don’t mind the comparison, because honestly, I loved that show when I was a child.

    Ed is developing as a character so seamlessly, and it was great seeing her build up her confidence and become more aware of her natural instincts as an investigator. And, well, the girl’s got guts! Not sure if I already told you this before but… the first person narration works very well in that respect.

    And Sean… he’s really grown on me since he was Cute Produce Guy, hehe. He’s the nice kind of guy, but with just the right amount of charm that makes him… well… irresistible! I should stop here or I might start drooling again ;).

    Oh, and the last pic, LOL, that was a very ingenious way of using the proposing interaction.

    PS: Sorry for the comment spam.

    • Marsar: The France vase case was a lot of fun to write and pose. LOL about the “Remington Steele” comparison. 🙂 I watched a lot of “Moonlighting” while I was a child, so apparently some of it rubbed off on me….

      I have a hard time imagining how I would tell this story in anything but Ed’s voice and in the first-person perspective. I think certain chapters might be better from Sean’s perspective, but in a way it allows more fun with the posing because I can tell certain things with the pictures that Ed leaves out or that she wouldn’t know or notice.

      That proposing interaction was perfect for this scene, and I was so happy it worked out–this was all still before I was using poseboxes.

      Never apologize for commenting (particularly for nice comments!). 🙂 Thank you!

    • Niura: It was fun, but challenging because of the home ownership rules and such–it was harder to work around. I never was good at fully exploiting the tools of the mods and hacks, so I am sure there is a way to do it that I couldn’t figure out at the time. I had to get inventive!

  28. A diamond ring? Oh wow! Wasn’t expecting that. You are great at mastering the cliffhangers and the plot turns and curveballs. I love Ed’s “cover story” in the morning when they were scoping out Vasquez’s “address” without Sean knowing what was “really” going on. Story 2 was fantastic. I enjoyed it and it kept me guessing and wanting to know more as we went along. I’m looking forward to Story 3.

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